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Trying to spruce up the ole portfolio, for a specific job I'd love. Its the kind of job you want so bad, you'd almost rather not apply because then you can still hope that you would have gotten it. Dream. Job.

 Check out a birthday card I made two years ago... Been nitpicking it for the past couple hours and trying to perfect before I send some things in. Critiques? Ideas? Start over? Let me have it! The lettering is done by creating lots of tiny versions of that specific letter, but in the space of that specific font's stroke. (Aka, the letter "H" is made up of a bunch of tiny h's)

Happy Birthday Mark!! (two years ago... )

Kelly